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How to Write Clearly

Edward T. Thompson · 1980

"Clear writing is a product of outlining before you write, knowing exactly how much your reader already knows, and ruthlessly cutting anything that shows off instead of explains."

The idea

Edward T. Thompson, then editor-in-chief of Reader's Digest, reduced nineteen years of editing down to five rules that cover almost every clarity problem a writer runs into.

Why it works

Outline first — on index cards, one point per card, grouped and sequenced before a word of prose gets written. Start exactly where your readers are, not a level above or below their actual knowledge. Avoid jargon: a scientist who wrote 'the biota exhibited a one hundred percent mortality response' meant 'all the fish died.' Use familiar combinations of words rather than inflated ones — a Roosevelt speechwriter changed 'We are endeavoring to construct a more inclusive society' to 'We're going to make a country in which no one is left out.' And use 'first-degree' words — ones that bring an image to mind immediately, without needing to be mentally translated first.

The takeaway — recall it first
Check your understanding

In Edward T. Thompson's example, what did the scientist's line 'the biota exhibited a one hundred percent mortality response' actually mean?

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